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	<title>Comments on: Why I&#8217;m Sure I&#8217;ll Be Published</title>
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		<title>By: Bren</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9906</link>
		<dc:creator>Bren</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 22:10:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I read through all of the comments expecting someone to bring up James Patterson&#039;s overwhelming flaw - italics. Go open one of his books, any page. Count the number of times the twat uses italics. This &#039;style&#039; makes it completely impossible for me to read one of his books, as my mind voice has to emphasise the words/sentences using the italics &amp; it&#039;s frickin exhausting.
Not to mention unnecessary, redundant (just to drive my point home!), ridiculous, irritating &amp; the mark of a moron who needs to be edited.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I read through all of the comments expecting someone to bring up James Patterson&#8217;s overwhelming flaw &#8211; italics. Go open one of his books, any page. Count the number of times the twat uses italics. This &#8216;style&#8217; makes it completely impossible for me to read one of his books, as my mind voice has to emphasise the words/sentences using the italics &amp; it&#8217;s frickin exhausting.<br />
Not to mention unnecessary, redundant (just to drive my point home!), ridiculous, irritating &amp; the mark of a moron who needs to be edited.</p>
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		<title>By: Denise!</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9857</link>
		<dc:creator>Denise!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 Jan 2010 16:47:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hmmm...I wish I had read this before I picked up the book Thursday.  My co-worker purchased it and said so far it was a good read and his previous works were enjoyable.  Oh well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hmmm&#8230;I wish I had read this before I picked up the book Thursday.  My co-worker purchased it and said so far it was a good read and his previous works were enjoyable.  Oh well.</p>
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		<title>By: Rogue</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9837</link>
		<dc:creator>Rogue</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Dec 2009 20:09:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Id do the Hambridge center. Looks like fun. and ultimately, Heaven!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Id do the Hambridge center. Looks like fun. and ultimately, Heaven!</p>
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		<title>By: SassyK</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9817</link>
		<dc:creator>SassyK</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Dec 2009 03:53:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>First of all. Alex Cross is Black? Second, he is a Bamma? He lives with his Grandmother and his 3 Children. I assume the kids stay with Nana because he is out fighting crime, but really?? (Okay he might not be a Bamma but he feels like a Bamma)

The retreat sounds great and I am sure you will get accepted. 
Number 15 looks like the cabin from Camp Chippawa(?) in the Addams Family movie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First of all. Alex Cross is Black? Second, he is a Bamma? He lives with his Grandmother and his 3 Children. I assume the kids stay with Nana because he is out fighting crime, but really?? (Okay he might not be a Bamma but he feels like a Bamma)</p>
<p>The retreat sounds great and I am sure you will get accepted.<br />
Number 15 looks like the cabin from Camp Chippawa(?) in the Addams Family movie</p>
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		<title>By: chynachicka</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9815</link>
		<dc:creator>chynachicka</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Dec 2009 19:58:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>the retreat sounds really cool, i&#039;m sure you will do fine with writing samples. i&#039;ve read your shorts and they are awesome. i really hope that you attend next year. i can&#039;t wait to read your published books. 

i&#039;ve never read anything by james patterson, i dont think. i&#039;m trying to pull away from black authors and read things that are also thought provoking and interesting. i like mysteries. the one mentioned in this blog sounds intriguing so i will be checking it out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>the retreat sounds really cool, i&#8217;m sure you will do fine with writing samples. i&#8217;ve read your shorts and they are awesome. i really hope that you attend next year. i can&#8217;t wait to read your published books. </p>
<p>i&#8217;ve never read anything by james patterson, i dont think. i&#8217;m trying to pull away from black authors and read things that are also thought provoking and interesting. i like mysteries. the one mentioned in this blog sounds intriguing so i will be checking it out.</p>
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		<title>By: nina</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9803</link>
		<dc:creator>nina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2009 19:38:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>See, that&#039;s where I think you have the difference between a good writer and a good storyteller. His stories are great. Suzanne&#039;s Diary For Nicholas comes to mind there. But his writing isn&#039;t.... BIG. It&#039;s very small. And usually, I like non-flowery, not-so-fancy writing, but his is too basic. 

Perfect example of a great writer who could also tell an amazing story without being overly verbose and flowery was Ed McBain.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>See, that&#8217;s where I think you have the difference between a good writer and a good storyteller. His stories are great. Suzanne&#8217;s Diary For Nicholas comes to mind there. But his writing isn&#8217;t&#8230;. BIG. It&#8217;s very small. And usually, I like non-flowery, not-so-fancy writing, but his is too basic. </p>
<p>Perfect example of a great writer who could also tell an amazing story without being overly verbose and flowery was Ed McBain.</p>
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		<title>By: nina</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9801</link>
		<dc:creator>nina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2009 19:28:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, I did. I think I&#039;m gonna do it as a book club selection for January.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I did. I think I&#8217;m gonna do it as a book club selection for January.</p>
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		<title>By: Tami</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tami</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2009 19:26:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You WILL get accepted.  Not a doubt in my mind.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You WILL get accepted.  Not a doubt in my mind.</p>
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		<title>By: Julia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2009 19:22:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Adam, you pretty much took the words out of my mouth.  His writting reads like an elementary school student wrote it.  I don&#039;t understand how any fully literate adult can enjoy reading it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adam, you pretty much took the words out of my mouth.  His writting reads like an elementary school student wrote it.  I don&#8217;t understand how any fully literate adult can enjoy reading it.</p>
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		<title>By: nina</title>
		<link>http://blogitoutb.com/2009/12/why-im-sure-ill-be-published/comment-page-1/#comment-9798</link>
		<dc:creator>nina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2009 19:20:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Normally, that would sound like hell. I&#039;m so starved for quiet time to write and finish some projects that I&#039;m really looking forward to it. I hope I get accepted. I&#039;ll try every year until I am.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Normally, that would sound like hell. I&#8217;m so starved for quiet time to write and finish some projects that I&#8217;m really looking forward to it. I hope I get accepted. I&#8217;ll try every year until I am.</p>
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